Black Poetry : The Heat of the Day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 25, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trying to deal with this oppresive heat
    he frowns as heat waves
    rise from the street
    his walk slow and lazy
    his mind a bit hazy
    sweat pours from his body
    where are the kids who sell lemon-aid?
    inside playing video games
    outside there is no coolness
    outside there is no shade
    there is only the air
    thick with humidity
    draining him of energy
    what can he do?
    where can he go?
    visions in his mind
    put him in winter
    walking through the snow

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice and tyte Bruh!!

    The heat sure does make a brutha wish for snow at times...I feel ya!!:rolleyes:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da maze of winter time when the heat is on a rise .
    nice to find some good family classic as if it was yesterday
    tyte drop man....
     
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    Nice BUMP!

    This is a tight flow.
    Thanks for the drop Brother Heartbeat
     
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    HOT piece (pardon the pun) and some awesome imagery!
     
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