Black Poetry : The Heat Of The Battle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Phlaze, Feb 27, 2002.

  1. Phlaze

    Phlaze Member MEMBER

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    The Heat of the Battle

    The battle between understanding and Misunderstanding
    Is the heat of the battle... to win it takes planning
    The win-lose situation....the patients and recreation
    Will soon win over with time and participation
    The misguidance of people's minds and thoughts
    Is what makes them misunderstand and need to be taught
    The Immaturity and Maturity between peoples minds
    Are what make the immature one's blind
    Maturity understands the settings and topics
    Of poetry in their minds which they seal up and lock it
    Trying to understand important poetry in a immature mind it rattles
    Posting true poetry and trying to understand is The Heat Of The Battle
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The heat of the battle
    Seems to rattle
    All that know
    But never show
    Poetry ain't a phase
    Ya told em here Phlaze
    Enjoyin' ya heavy vibe
    Think I'm diggin ya mental
    My potna in scribe...

    :peace:
    GQ​
     
  3. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you scribe like a friend of mines. keep um coming
    feelin the flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true poetry most def half da battle as u read da lines
    trying to understand da flows of da poet.....ya said it all
    in dis here.....nice work
     
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    Uuummmm hmmmm, Phlaze ya burnin it up!
    a thought provokin scribe.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poet...i'm lovin' it.
     
  7. Phlaze

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    i wanna thank everybody for posting to my poem being though im new and all thanks alot i really appreciate it holla back
     
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