Black Poetry : The Heart of a Tomboy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EbonyQueen06, Sep 17, 2004.

  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Follow your heart into the unexpected,
    It'll be an unforgettable journey.
    My Love shines brighter than the stars
    It's the easiest thing to spot in my heart
    Drown in my thoughts and desires,
    And climb into the future I have planned
    We might be goin different paths,
    But you'll see my love will never pass
    I know I act like love ain't a big thang,
    But I means the world to me
    I feel so wonderful when you tell me u luv me,
    My body goes in Cardiac arrest
    I want u to go inside my heart to my four chambers
    serious, tomboyish, goofy and the side that Loves 2 Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice love to hear u in flow cross da mic
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this, from the title to the ending line.
     
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    Wanting someone to love all sides. I know what you mean...I liked this flow.
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank-u everbody I really appreciate it
     
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    I like you as you are my Queen
    Serene and debonaire
    True to form...
    Light as air ~
    Tomboy,
    With a flair
     
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