Black Poetry : The Heart Of A Poet Can Beat Inside A Blackman

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I want you sister's to acknowledge
    I am not about to take you to school
    I am about to take you to college
    spit some knowledge
    in raw poetic rhapsody as I vibe
    about the Poets Heart and what
    it means to me.
    You see the thought has occured
    to me that is where the doubt must
    be!
    What? You ask
    And I reply it's not about me and my
    guy! It's the essence I feel when I
    read a thugged out love poem, the
    raw erotic trhill that makes you wish
    for inkwells and writing with a quill...
    if you will
    Examine with me where can the Poets
    Heart be
    Inside you and inside me
    But it is also inside he
    And he is
    a Blackman, strong and hard, not one
    that you would imagine who could write
    a bard.
    But lawd...
    when he lays that pen to the pad
    You willl sweat and tremble like
    the best sex you ever had.
    Make you visualize hands and things
    between ya thighs
    Him looking you deep in your eyes
    Or just a tap on the *** as he
    pass
    with the words that he writes oh
    how he delights , substitutes
    movies on cold winter nights
    reading and recalling the rapture
    of the primitive wave of realization

    "THAT THE HEART OF A POET CAN
    BEAT INSIDE A BLACKMAN"
    BJS (C)2002
     
  2. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got your blackmen down to the "T" and I am happy to agree. Peace.
     
  3. OneTyme.

    OneTyme. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Scribe here!!

    Tell me more...
    Sweet flo!!
     
  4. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot !

    Lawd have mercy !
    On point here ! VERY nice :hot:
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsLB,

    Thorough piece!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks be to the brotha's!

    Thanks truly go to the brotha's who inspired me on this one!
    I was reading Brotherman, Da Street So'ja and Madrapper when the mused visited me with a sweet epiphany and the rest as they say is History! I am going to enjoy performing this one live at the Mic sets around KC!
    Thanks for reading!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya Msb.

    I enjoyed this piece.
    I always did enjoy
    your poetic skills. :)

    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell somebody Poet!

    BE
     
  9. Ashante

    Ashante Member MEMBER

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    whatchu sayin sis!?

    talk!
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    Ashante, my new found poetess thanks! I know you feeling me!
    Heartbeat such an honor to have you read and agree... I consider your approval tantamount to true success.
    When people read and hear and understand , then you have done your job. But , when people respond and feel what you
    are trying to convey, you have worked wonders. It is an honor to have the influence of so many positive brothers and "sisters" to learn and grow and share with!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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