Black Poetry : " the harder it falls "

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..... this girl l know seduces the trojans out of wal- mart
    with a soft whisper...
    she's a super- freak... in "who's who" in high school she was more likely
    to drop the draws in less than a week...

    so one night on the phone they both began to speak...

    i don't mean to sound graphic..
    but she likes it raw- no plastic..
    can oral sex a man somethin' tragic
    and have him leave his family with a single blow... the blow of magic
    and he's O.U.T. - out... like that white guy from Harlem Nights...
    she'll make you shed that tear

    oh so calm the wind of passion blows on his ear
    her bedroom is like a chamber... both passion and danger,
    a madd blend for an ***mosphere
    where "will" beats the crap out of "wont"
    when she touches him in the front....

    so she does all the things she said she would....
    but one thing was misunderstood
    his wife followed him to that neighborhood and....
    well l'll let you guess..
    l'll just say neither of them had time to dress
    but no ***** is never that good-

    the harder it rises the harder it falls
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this some tight sh*t man you got it going on flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life Lesson Learned!
    I could always learn a thing or two about word manipulation from the teacher!!
    The flow is incredible as always
    U never disappoint!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    fellow town drunk
    twision
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U said a mouth full
    ofter the lit head tells the big head what to do
    be a fool and allow it to rule fall in the mist of
    something smooth ,,,,,,,,,she bust his groove
    checkmate he lose.

    i like how u broke this down wit a deep message
    the more it rise the harder it fall is no lie....peace bruh
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was good!
    That was dam good!!!!!!!!
    Flow on baby:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey now
    Preach
    This was madd hot
    The flava was real for real
    We call them gurls HeadDoctors
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sooo good!!!!
     
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    Sometimes in the end, mo pleasure leads to so much pain. This came through like a bullet poet.
     
  9. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    tight piece.....a **** good ride, i was there all the way, cause i've been there. i love the informal, loose swing this piece had....like freestyle.

    excellent.
     
  10. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YA GOT THAT RIGHT .... DON'T GET CAUGHT WITH YA DRAWS IN YA POCKET ... BECAUSE YA WOMAN/MAN GONNA KNOW U HAD A REASON TO TAKE THEM OFF ... LOL AT LEAST THAT'S WHAT GRANDMA TOLD ME .... EXCELLENT PIECE J'HIAH
     
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