Black Poetry : THE HANDS OF TIME...

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could turn back the hands of time

    I would go back to the first note you ever sent me
    I would go back to when we were just two people embarking
    And enjoying the words of what could be

    If I could turn back the hands of time

    I would go back to the first time I ever heard your voice
    And how I thought to myself, [email protected] he’s making me moist
    Just from a hello

    If I could turn back the hands of time

    I would go back to the first time I laid eyes on you
    the first time you held me so tight, the first kiss, the first touch
    the first time we spent the night together

    If I could turn back the hands of time

    I would go back to the first time that
    I knew that I was falling in love with you
    The first time you told me you loved me too

    If only I could turn back the hands of time

    But I can’t. Nor can I take away the things
    I did that made you go away and leave me in this f****-up state
    I know you did what you felt you had to do
    But I also know you still love me and I still love you

    If I could turn back the hands of time
    You would feel how much I truly do

    If only I could turn back the hands of time

    But since I can not I can only live in the present
    So if your not still so angry, how bout you just call me
    and lets see if we can start a new

    leave the past under the grass buried where it needs to be
    Bring me your mind soul and body empty and free
    As I shall bring you me

    No more wasting our time cryn’ over the spilled milk
    Lets wipe it up and pour a new glass
    let our love explode to full blast
    Plan our future not dwell on the past

    Cuz I cant turn back the hands of time

    :time:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what i learn was as time past so do everything else
    only to vent into a new future ..........well stated and done
     
  3. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS PEICE WAS ELOQUENTLY PUT MAKING THE READER THINK NICE WORK
     
  4. nevar

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    hey gurl how you been doing enjoyed the flo. keep on writing my sista.
     
  5. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fresh starts and new beginnings. I'm all for them
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLUV GIRL THIS WAS ABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL YOU KEPT THIS PIECE REAL I LOVE IT

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    As always thank you for the luv
    and kind words.

    sheikdadon:
    Welcome!!!!
    Thank you for checkn' out my flo.
    Yeah, I been doin' some thinkn'

    nevar:
    Thanks so much for the visit. I checked you out on myspace
    it see you doin' yo thang girl.:)

    Napturally:
    Yes, nothing like a fresh start.
    Thanks for the visit.

    sweettee29:
    Your words of kindness are much
    appreciated. Your always sooo sweet
    too me. Thanks for the continued luv

    Much luv to you all...
     
  8. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What else can I say. Sista you laced this so tight a brother wanna go get a glass of milk with some oreos! Your work is outright luminous literature!
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ Emissary:
    You are too sweet and funny.
    Thank you so much for those
    words of kindnees.

    P.S. I'l bring the milk and you bring the oreos. Deal:)

    Much luv
     
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    Whew..if only...if only we knew then, what we know now, how different things would be. But since that can't be, all we can do is live and hopefully, learn. This was wonderful, had me nodding my head in agreement all the way through.
     
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