Black Poetry : the guest

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mizdee2002, Jan 22, 2002.

  1. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i daydream now
    about love's temporary visit...
    she came to stay
    uninvited
    (by the way, i call her she, because she is a *****)
    & invaded my personal space
    she took over -
    put her feet on my heart
    & flicked my emotive remote
    love kept me up all night long
    & had me up early enough to kiss the dawn
    even when i told her
    i really hadn't prepare for her visit
    & asked if she could come back another time
    she laughed and said,
    "i go and come as i please, honey, so u may as well get used to me!"
    & i did
    whatever ole' love wanted
    she got it from me
    i was her willing slave-
    i mean hostess...
    providing her with enough
    syrupy sweet sentimentality
    to make her fat
    & happy
    and then
    out of the blue
    when i was dependent on her daily presence
    (addicted?)
    she decided to leave
    i pleaded with her to stay
    "we can work this thang out!", i begged
    but she said
    "no, i really must go"
    & as quickly as she appeared
    she was gone
    leaving nothing but
    memories of her stay
    i was devasted
    what would i do without love to keep me company?
    & at the very moment
    hate knocked at my heart's door...
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MizDee...

    You know I love this one... It surely spoke to my heart!!
    Love ya sis!:)
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte poet

    Very tyte.
    I'm feeling this flow
    Good work
    Holla:toast:
     
  4. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll for the luv. i truly appreciate it.

    dee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yesss!!

    beautiful work of love wit compassion flowin'
    work dem keyz please.....:D
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm tryin' to get like u....

    thank u for the luv rich.

    dee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome Queen Dee

    what one's hold inside her pen is da essence
    of great beauty displayed to canvas of poetic
    justice sistah u have what i have as i do of u
    we r da same yet different.......:heart: :)
     
  8. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u made me blush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:blush:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when ya doneblushing

    do smile and know we r one :)
    poet of poet
    hand N' hand
    heart of heart
    pen & canvas
    poetic love:heart:
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sweetness...
    the warmth of your pen
    on my mind
    makes this rainy day
    seem like a
    balmy summer afternoon-
    my favorite type of day

    i thank u rich for making this love lorn poet's day

    dee
     
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