Black Poetry : The Guessing Game

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jan 19, 2008.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Hey DSS
    Very cool flow warrior
    In time as we grow the mind
    open more, yet sometimes we're not sure
    And taking the step to guess what it may be
    will place US in a position ito try maybe we're
    be right or maybe wrong
    It's the chance of life. I enjoyed you flow
    for the reason that it help me to better understand
    that sometimes we have to guess. And hope it's
    the right door.

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    Nothing is for certain, and we are afraid of heartbreak. So afraid sometimes that we let that right one slip away, cause we had cold feet. This piece speaks in volumes to many So'ja.
     
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    WOW DSS! Sometimes I feel like this whole thing called life is just one big guessing game. I pray that I make the right decisions...sometimes I do and sometimes I don't but your piece is very profound!!!!
     
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    hee,hee,hee,

    for real man,
    this is real flow...
    lovin that way it seems so effortless from you.

    another deep write , so'ja
    thanks
    Desert Storm
     
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    I wan scream
    I wan shout
    I wan swing
    I wan pop
    I wan ryde

    But I don't wan die

    I wan go
    I wan stay
    I wan fight
    I wan surrender
    I wan cement together

    But I wan run.. cause nothing is 4eva

    my heart is beating funny
    people dyin over money
    what we have is beautiful..

    it is the world that fo sho is ugly...

    right now ... I'm feeling so alone..

    but I know u there to hold me up..
    I'm learning how to not do..

    everything on my own...

    I appreciate ur patience...
    I appreciate ur strenghth...

    Cause I must admit that for 2day..

    I just don't have none left.....

    If I could knock right at ur door..
    be certain that i'd be there...

    just to get a so'ja hug..
    because I know u care.......

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    excellent wordplay along with a sincere explanation. sometimes you got to grab the person and tell them what you feel like, no guesstamations, hints, blue's clues or nothin'. just right out realness. good write. who was it to, if it's not too personal.
     
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