Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jan 19, 2008.
Very cool flow warrior
In time as we grow the mind
open more, yet sometimes we're not sure
And taking the step to guess what it may be
will place US in a position ito try maybe we're
be right or maybe wrong
It's the chance of life. I enjoyed you flow
for the reason that it help me to better understand
that sometimes we have to guess. And hope it's
the right door.
Nothing is for certain, and we are afraid of heartbreak. So afraid sometimes that we let that right one slip away, cause we had cold feet. This piece speaks in volumes to many So'ja.
WOW DSS! Sometimes I feel like this whole thing called life is just one big guessing game. I pray that I make the right decisions...sometimes I do and sometimes I don't but your piece is very profound!!!!
for real man,
this is real flow...
lovin that way it seems so effortless from you.
another deep write , so'ja
I wan scream
I wan shout
I wan swing
I wan pop
I wan ryde
But I don't wan die
I wan go
I wan stay
I wan fight
I wan surrender
I wan cement together
But I wan run.. cause nothing is 4eva
my heart is beating funny
people dyin over money
what we have is beautiful..
it is the world that fo sho is ugly...
right now ... I'm feeling so alone..
but I know u there to hold me up..
I'm learning how to not do..
everything on my own...
I appreciate ur patience...
I appreciate ur strenghth...
Cause I must admit that for 2day..
I just don't have none left.....
If I could knock right at ur door..
be certain that i'd be there...
just to get a so'ja hug..
because I know u care.......
the official street ambassador
excellent wordplay along with a sincere explanation. sometimes you got to grab the person and tell them what you feel like, no guesstamations, hints, blue's clues or nothin'. just right out realness. good write. who was it to, if it's not too personal.
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