Black Poetry : The Greatest Wonder (For J'hiah)

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    butterflies across rippled streams
    take view in care of you

    a solemn call beckoning a queen
    to show her king proper respect
    like morning dew

    ...nothing in this world compares to you
    the epitome of your love from heaven
    goes beyond day seven

    and i can tell you were made for me
    your beautiful eyes show tranquility
    from the warmth of your spirit's humility

    the greatest wonder of the world on high
    i see clearly

    not questioning the reason(s) why
    for i know in you lies "VANILLA SKY" ;)
    as we have "ONE LAST CRY" like Brian Mcknight
    before saying goodbye :(

    this world makes me sigh for nothing.....
    compares to you the epitome of your love
    from heaven goes beyond day seven

    and i can tell you were made for me
    your beautiful eyes show tranquility
    from the warmth of your spirit's humility

    the greatest wonder of the world on high
    i see clearly




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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my dear sis...

    when you get this kind.... you must bless the Lord at all times, for His wisdom, His goodness and for sho nuf knowin how to give good gifts to His children....

    I'm feeling you feeling his beauty, chile! (hands wavin!)

    :heart:

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da blessing in his name

    I feel u within on dis here piece:heart:
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :rolling: :spin: :cool: :luv: :smokin: :jawdrop: :crying:


    a queen and a tease in one package.
    um um um.


    nfinite,
    jh
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'sup?
     
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    Poeticdelight....

    Beautiful piece......


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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