Black Poetry : "The Great HE is, The Great I AM"

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  1. Sumthinnew

    Sumthinnew Member MEMBER

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    When I'm all alone, and no one is there,
    I have no home and my body is bare
    Who is it that shelter's me- He is

    When Im sick, weak, and bad in health,
    I have no job and I have no wealth
    Who is it that comforts me- He is

    When I was lost in my mind and couldnt be found
    Tripping along the way and falling down
    Who is it that picks me up- He is

    When i was drowning deep in my own sins,
    I couldnt hold my breath and I couldnt swim
    Who is it that saves me- He is

    When i was heading down the path of self-destruction
    And i was seeking help for a new self-construction
    Who is it that builds up my spirit- He is

    "When you are weak and not feeling strong, and the road to a righteous life seems long. Nobodys there to walk with you, nobody is there to talk to you..."

    "Who is it that is by your side- I AM"

    God will do exceedenly and abundently things, all you have to do is ask. Thanks for letting me share.

    Sumthinnew
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this vibe..very well posed
    flow on feeling this

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    tis true...GOD IS...
    GOD
    IS
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this write like the flow of it also :terrific: :terrific:
     
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    Praise Hymn... PEACE
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God is a friend indeed, only through him can we achieve greatness. You put this into words so well, amen poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done so GODLY liad out he's so good to us
     
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    once again thanks for the love and support from positive people. The good vibes i get the more they inspire me to write.
    Thanks
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved this flow, this piece is a reminder to all of our spirits that nothing is truly about us but all is about God. Flow on!
     
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