Black Poetry : THE GREAT FLOOD (poet's act l)

[$$RICH$$]

Deep river of spun
hot blood drip
to icy streets
under me is a
creator of creation
looming & weaving
the darken souls
given forth light
and life to continue
living
yet
inside the cuff of
a greater lash
crap side the backz
in the streets of
struggling hoodz
the fight to earn
da
rites
of our future
which holdz
inside every child
our children
so sent by da heavens
a more compassionate
compromised bond was
da
Love of
da
LORD'S
creation
yes that's what we are
intellingence greater
then any by far
but displayed as used
up mental mindz
killing by wordz
sitll a crime
out of the distant starz
a love of nutured rapture
comes in the form of light
and brings this hope
O' no don't stop me i'm not done ....
shhhhh! hush listen my friend
dis deeper flood comes
from down within ..
we spit and vibe as we scribe
without too much heed
to the endgame for earth of
either great deed
we had to respond to these
fears and our greed
so sent me to open eyez to see
my beings not of this place
but i walk in struggle wit
the same face, so cometh
da great flood of created love
listen to the wisdom as it feed
u knowledge of bondmentship
love is the power to start it's what
we call the front line of a poet's mind
realize how greatful to be alive
and stop the word crime this not
by design nor stage
been labled
been boxed in cage
these thing send a mind
in rage of lack hope and
now one by one da soul hang
from the rope but the mission
is my war to free da minds
giveth self love and feed warmth
for the birth of nudity as the spirit
is released ........ACT. l

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$R

 

[MzBlkAngel]

mind
bogglin
makes ya think...
which way ya goin...
dis here with a twist....
underworld or your ground
i feel all dis
its been said........
lovin this flow.....
cant wait for act 2....
rite on please....
just an Angel's view......

 

[angelicsage]

this I've quoted below...really hit me as the substance
of this piece...def' mind opening...thank you for the teaching...
My insight has been increased with this piece...

"we spit and vibe as we scribe
without too much heed
to the endgame for earth of
either great deed
we had to respond to these
fears and our greed
so sent me to open eyez to see
my beings not of this place
but i walk in struggle wit
the same face, so cometh
da great flood of created love
listen to the wisdom as it feed
u knowledge of bondmentship
love is the power to start it's what
we call the front line of a poet's mind"

much luv, Angeli

 

[$$RICH$$]

Mzblkangel........Thank u so much for feeling this out
in the face of a poet act. ll is inbound stay tune


Angelic.......O' yes it's the poet's act of how life is
in all shapes forms and color it's the love of the
creator in the starz of rapture and even in the quiet
moment the pen is the waepon of choice and our voice
act . ll inbound stay tune.

Thank u both for the reply & love given

 

[Khasm13]

word...
speak wit a boom'n voice
da craetor gave us dat choice

this was really tight...
look'n to act 2
peace
khasm