Black Poetry : THE GREAT FLOOD (poet's act l)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Deep river of spun
    hot blood drip
    to icy streets
    under me is a
    creator of creation
    looming & weaving
    the darken souls
    given forth light
    and life to continue
    living
    yet
    inside the cuff of
    a greater lash
    crap side the backz
    in the streets of
    struggling hoodz
    the fight to earn
    da
    rites
    of our future
    which holdz
    inside every child
    our children
    so sent by da heavens
    a more compassionate
    compromised bond was
    da
    Love of
    da
    LORD'S
    creation
    yes that's what we are
    intellingence greater
    then any by far
    but displayed as used
    up mental mindz
    killing by wordz
    sitll a crime
    out of the distant starz
    a love of nutured rapture
    comes in the form of light
    and brings this hope
    O' no don't stop me i'm not done ....
    shhhhh! hush listen my friend
    dis deeper flood comes
    from down within ..
    we spit and vibe as we scribe
    without too much heed
    to the endgame for earth of
    either great deed
    we had to respond to these
    fears and our greed
    so sent me to open eyez to see
    my beings not of this place
    but i walk in struggle wit
    the same face, so cometh
    da great flood of created love
    listen to the wisdom as it feed
    u knowledge of bondmentship
    love is the power to start it's what
    we call the front line of a poet's mind
    realize how greatful to be alive
    and stop the word crime this not
    by design nor stage
    been labled
    been boxed in cage
    these thing send a mind
    in rage of lack hope and
    now one by one da soul hang
    from the rope but the mission
    is my war to free da minds
    giveth self love and feed warmth
    for the birth of nudity as the spirit
    is released ........ACT. l

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mind
    bogglin
    makes ya think...
    which way ya goin...
    dis here with a twist....
    underworld or your ground
    i feel all dis
    its been said........
    lovin this flow.....
    cant wait for act 2....
    rite on please....
    just an Angel's view......:kiss:
     
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    this I've quoted below...really hit me as the substance
    of this piece...def' mind opening...thank you for the teaching...
    My insight has been increased with this piece...

    "we spit and vibe as we scribe
    without too much heed
    to the endgame for earth of
    either great deed
    we had to respond to these
    fears and our greed
    so sent me to open eyez to see
    my beings not of this place
    but i walk in struggle wit
    the same face, so cometh
    da great flood of created love
    listen to the wisdom as it feed
    u knowledge of bondmentship
    love is the power to start it's what
    we call the front line of a poet's mind"

    much luv, Angeli
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mzblkangel........Thank u so much for feeling this out
    in the face of a poet act. ll is inbound stay tune


    Angelic.......O' yes it's the poet's act of how life is
    in all shapes forms and color it's the love of the
    creator in the starz of rapture and even in the quiet
    moment the pen is the waepon of choice and our voice
    act . ll inbound stay tune.

    Thank u both for the reply & love given
     
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    word...
    speak wit a boom'n voice
    da craetor gave us dat choice

    this was really tight...
    look'n to act 2
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Thank u my brutha
    in all acts of a poet
    the true us is a struggle
    forth da love of bond come
    act.ll comming soon.
     
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    this was beautiful and deep...
    "LORD'S
    creation
    yes that's what we are
    intellingence greater
    then any by far
    but displayed as used
    up mental mindz"...
    made me feel that since we are supposed to be God's greatest and most intelligent creation, to rule over the animals of the land and the sea, we need to act like it...instead of acting like animals of the land and the sea...i felt this really i did.
     
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    O' yes indeed true love......
    our greater self must see
    the inner self and know
    da love of him is the power
    so through my handz
    he speak .....shhhh! listen
    ACT . ll on the rise ......Thank u
     
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    in the middle of our own creed
    lay a deed of every woman & man
    let us all stand on the path we make
    and walk in the light of grace
    we all have a direction follow your
    and i follow mines
    Act. ll headed up stream
     
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    another masterpiece, $$RICH$$. Lovin every line.
     
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