Black Poetry : The Good,The Bad, And Ugly

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  1. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to know you love me,
    not partially but completely.
    Not what is humane, not just the good,
    but the bad, and the ugly.

    I want to know you love me,
    please show me that you care,
    I know sometimes I get foolish,
    but I need to know your still there.

    I want to know you love me,
    stubborn I can be, spots of selfishness,
    not looking for understanding.

    I want to know you love me,
    reguardless of what I am not.
    Rather it be physically or mentally,
    right now this is all that I got.

    I want to know you love me,
    though I sometimes can be abrasive,
    and my insecurites, fears often can cause
    are contentions.

    I want to know you love me,
    I know I'm asking alot,
    on my own nervous I get,
    I wonder can you love my defective parts.

    See I need to know you love me,
    dispite all of my ways,
    so please love me like I love you, the good,
    the bad, and ugly.




     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The gift of perfect love for an imperfect person, loving imperfectly! Great piece!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful scribe....
     
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    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful

    I need to send this to the one that might have gotten away!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis be on hit and the feelings of true love is posed here
    tyte scribe loved dis piece
     
  6. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just want to thank everyone for there comments.
    I really appreciate them.
    It's good to find a site like this were you can express your
    self and thoughts or feelings.
    Then have people let you know there inspired by it or liked or loved it.Thanks so much.
    you all really inspire me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u for all u given and expressing upon us
    we family and full of love this what makes us
    so strong ....... continue to express self forth
    love given as u give it ......again welcome to a new place
    a home for ya mental mind to release
     
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