Black Poetry : The Good Guy

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  1. ghost_writer

    ghost_writer Member MEMBER

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    I'm the good guy, you know...
    females don't like the good guys
    which is why im not suprised
    when those thighs walk by
    and those eyes....
    look...
    past me...
    and i
    try to let em' go see...
    but it seems that cupid has a brand new scope
    and he's just
    hoping to try it out on me
    so no matter how fast i flee
    that infra-red beam seems to be aimed
    straight..
    at my heart..
    w/ love...
    but love....
    love comes and goes
    like those notes we use to write in the 5th grade
    or atleast...
    the words do...
    but she had curves too
    and that purfume...
    who knew that beauty like this existed?
    i mean
    i would've thought that she
    could only be seen in day dreams
    not here in my midst
    she must be lost...
    and that was the last thought that crossed my mind
    as she spit out a line
    from behind a set of
    glossy lips
    and as her hips made my tongue trip
    i skipped the resonse
    and went straight into a stare...
    see
    i was filled w/ lust
    and trust my mind was about to bust
    from all the thoughts of what i could do to her but..
    mmm...
    mmm...
    mmm.....

    i'm the good guy
    which is why i just reply w/ a "hi", and a wave
    and save my thoughts for a later day
    as i stumble into a conversation
    hatin' this temptation to say something stupid
    hoping that cupid was taking aim
    once agian i remain.... speechless
    my...
    feet..
    just...
    stand there
    my heart quickens it's pace
    my mind begins to race
    and i begin to chase those faint ideas of
    what to say
    next...
    i'm sure she expects me
    to say something smoothe
    as i
    soothe her
    and subdue those emotional defense
    which have been up for so long
    but man...
    MAN was she wrong
    cause my plan all along
    was to collect my thoughts and retreat
    rather than repeat yet another embarrasing
    incident w/ the female species which...
    she wont even remember long enought to tell her friends..
    and so our relationship ends...
    before it ever begins...
    this is the story of the good guy...
    and i'll always ask...
    what if...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know so well about the good guy splash how one is over looked
    surely can relate man.......
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, and trust most women aren't ready for "the good guy" but when the time is right no amount of tongue-tie or speechlessness will stop the right woman from approaching you.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HeyThere...

    :hiya:...Good guys top off my list:)...But where are they hiding their slick behinds at:look:....remain steadfast, and surely you shall find your 'good gal'

    :love:

    :picture:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ghost_writer:
    This is a very nice read. I so enjoyed it.
    But lets move on...There's nothing wrong with
    being a good guy. Go a heard say something
    to her. You maybe surprise.
    Really luved your flo.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight piece
    it was a little hard to read because of the structure
    but this was a real hot piece poet one can relate
    uno