Black Poetry : THE GLAMOUROUS SUN

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm running free.
    Glorious sunlight
    beams down on
    me.

    I cannot be captured.
    What follows behind,
    I am faster than.

    I am not afraid.
    I like being
    just beyond
    the edge.

    Slowly, I am
    finding my way.
    I am at an
    euphoric peace.

    I am thriving under
    the beautiful rays
    of this magnificent
    sun.

    Nothing can erase
    the freedom I feel
    deep within my soul.

    The glamourous sun,
    it shines down on me,
    moistening my warm skin.
    I am sun-blessed
    by the ecstasy of calm.

    Every sunray,
    I drink in.
    My body is electrified.
    I am happy and alive.

    I pray, I will
    always feel this way,
    elated and full of life,
    as I strive under
    the glamourous sun.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    beautiful and breath taking as always! Never stop blessin us with your spiritual flows!
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Purple,

    Thanks so much!! I'll keep trying to inspire, but sometimes I don't know if I always can. Sometimes, I feel the weight of the world tugging at my soul!!

    I am so glad you dropped me a note!!

    :thanks: for writing!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so beautiful....like everything you write, of course....your a talented writer...
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey LovelyGoldenOne, :wave:

    I am so glad you stopped by!! I am so happy you think my poem is beautiful. This brings such warmness to my soul!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Nice Piece..I like this one..it is just how I am feeling today..Much Love Rico
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rico, :wave:

    Thanks so much!!

    Isn't it a wonderful sensation to feel so alive and free!!

    I hope you contunie to feel this way!

    :thanks:for the:read:

    Much love to you too!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwww so beautiful Sierra nice piece here I like I like until next time

    keep flowin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how sweet it is, how sweet it is
    sunshine blue skies
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Serenti,

    I am so pleased you liked it!!

    Thanks for the read!!

    I appreciate you stopping by!!

    ~Sierra~:heart: