Black Poetry : The Gift Box (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 15, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    of all the others
    his present was wrapped the best
    but it was empty


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
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    hmmmmmmmm :)

    you know i wanna ask
    but i know better ... hehehe

    you never cease to amaze me

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  3. Hunter

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    MORAL OF THE STORY:

    beware of black men carrying gift boxes..

    *JACK-***-IN-THE-BOX*

    :D
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one

    thumped me all up in the chest.....seems I've known a couple menz bearing gift boxes with rotten goods inside!

    tight Mizz Mama

    SWT
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    This is very interesting. I even chuckled a little while reading it. My interpretation: A good looking, well dressed man, with nothing going on upstairs.:D..... You'z Good, A.

    Hunter, that was funna :laugh:

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    outward appearances

    often hides what lies beneath....

    pretty paper don't mean much at all...

    K
     
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