Black Poetry : The Ghost of You

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember you,
    when it first began,
    you talked of your desires,
    and your beliefs as a man,
    I knew it was you which I wouuld thrive,
    You became my air..
    and kept me alive.

    Now when I think of you,
    a little piece of me dies,
    I showed you my world,
    my wishes and desires,
    Together we made sense,
    invincible... its true.

    Now all I have is the Ghost of you,
    no phone calls,
    no contact,
    a text message,
    in which i delay in responding back,
    you come in and out of my world,
    from yours,
    to mine..

    leaving me with raised hairs,
    and that tingle down my spine,
    my heart flutters,
    thumping like a "Timberland" beat,
    As you dissappear,
    as if you were never here,
    My eyes hold on,
    to the ghost image of you,
    my mind tells me
    the moments shared never really existed,
    it was all in my head...

    But it feels real to me when,
    were all cuddled up in bed,
    but maybe I was making love,
    to the Ghost of you instead.
    False memories,
    created in my head,
    but I'm still in love,
    with the Ghost of you.
    Enough said.


    :insane:
     
  2. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real tight post....u was doin' ya thang.....made me really feel wat u was sayin'.....once again, real tight post!!!!




    :climb: to tha top
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thsi was real good.....funny cause i just wrote something similar with 'ghost' in the title..thats bugged out!

    anywayz tho,good ta see some1 else is on my level....lol....stay up poet!
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice. you deserve a cookie
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we hold on to what was or could be
    and feel at time not complete until we open
    up and see all it is and know it's the Ghost
    of feeling we have ............well done sista .
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great poem...exactly what i'm going thru
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nicely written i know what ya mean....tight drop

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's times like these that have you second guessing yourself as to whether what you were feeling was actually real. If you felt it that strongly, it was real, if the other person really didn't then that's his loss. Well written piece.
     
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    peace Poetic,

    Those ghosts are powerfull ain't they?

    felt the passion all da way tru!!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yall.. luch love and peace family.. I cannot begin to explain what your continious love and support does for me. :spin: Makes my head spin!
     
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