Black Poetry : the garden (pt.serenity)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i fell at my God's feet
    for i am now and forever complete...

    waterfalls pour a scant peace
    into my soul's stream..
    even treasures in the earth have no eternal beam
    or so it seems

    mountaincrests take my view to heaven
    but without you
    neither God or i can view day seven

    i am yet incomplete

    *alone*
    awaiting my queen from the throne of the garden
    as i peer pass the meadows
    for i feel her near

    animals then look as i run through the brook...

    as sure as it's God i fear
    He has defined to me the reason for all creation
    now that she's here

    having in her dark pr(essence) the aura of the moon/
    in her eyes i saw a lumniescence i longed for in the sun
    now
    life has just begun
    to be as one
    now
    and infinitely

    purpose becomes clear as the sky
    as i shed the first tear from my eye

    i am yet in complete
    paradise

    i fell at my God's feet
    for i am now and forever complete.


    -edited by jehiah-
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    **mint green**

    i am now and forever complete
    as the world brings me to my
    feet

    conquering defeat from this
    mind boggling heat
    i am rescued

    like little bo peep and her
    flock of sheep (a little humor)

    taking her seat in a special
    hide away leaping over the heap

    fleeing into the arms of everlasting
    love sowing what i reap

    now i bow gracefully :)


    pd
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JehiahPoetic.


    sweet lil brother of mine... i miss you!!!

    ...but ****!!!!... you still got it! :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this was....groove....

    Ohhhh..."how does your garden grow??!!"

    tight!!

    nice to read you again poet

    :)

    *buttercups*
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    y'all are crazee..

    GA_Sunshyne (peach of poetry)-
    miss you as well..
    i'll be in Georgia in a couple of weeks, maybe we can kinect..

    Destee-
    ahhh stop it with the cuddlin' and kissin', it's softenin' my rough side :lol:

    Hunter-
    how does the garden grow?
    i read the vagina chronicles and got the 411.
    they show how to plant, fertilize.... all'o dat.
    for more info, i'll hit you via e-mail. :wink:

    beatiful poetessess,
    thanx for the read.

    nfinitely.
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd,
    reap on girl..
    :wink:
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah, poet...just a lovely piece, yes indeed. your work is always enjoyable. keep on scribin', dear poet.


    ~~~expressedlove~~~
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well written poet
    thank you for sharing
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 4 the love shaz and listerscribin' and peeps...

    nfinitely,
    jh.
     
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