Black Poetry : The games over...

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Games over...

    Look at me mister, take a real good look :huh: ...at what you had and lost,
    I'm getting rid of your @ss, today, right now...no matter what the cost.

    My hips are moving, and my "sway" ...still got some play,
    get to stepping, trott on...cause I have no more to say.

    My mouth done got dry, and my body's dripping with sweat,
    and just watch me and my actions...cause, :nono: no more will you get.

    The road you choose to take...I do not intend to go,
    and sooner or later, I know ...you're gonna 'reap what you sow.

    There's really only one part...that makes this story sad...
    you wanted so much to be good...yet, you wasn't really bad.

    Just confused about life's values, ...and what it had in store,
    and instead of taking life chances, you blindly chose the door.

    And the writing :deal: on the wall, and all the thoughts in my head
    it keeps vividly telling me that...you're gonna end up dead

    We had our fun, in the sun...and thank you for loving me madly,
    but I''ll be okay, yes I'll make it just fine ...and I'm holding my head up gladly.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep fire heavy twitch
    ur telling it like dis
    second chance to romance
    don't give up just in .........
    whoa sis u on fire i see whewwww
     
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    I gotta give it up to you, sister - this is intensely powerful. :welldone:
     
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    Many mistakes in life we look back upon and wonder why in the world we chose that path. The answers are never easy. Another strong piece for sure poet.
     
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    peace,

    Sway on sista.........sway onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!

    Indeed, universal law will catch him.........U stay in the light & shine as u always dooooooooooooooo!!

    peace from your brotha
     
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    You are truly a Queen with your style and your grace evokes so much power with a pen and you truly know how to heal souls, thank you so much for the strength you just gave me, in a moment i was weak, but know i feel empowered.
    You will always have my love and support, thank you sis :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I say $$RICH$$ ...you know I got nothing but luv for ya, thanks
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much respect to you sister and luv, thanks for the props
     
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    So true, the answers are never easy, too bad some things are not often seen, thanks for the luv
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh info
    you are just the sweetest, thanks for the ^5 on this and surely I will keep it moving ...for no other than me.
     
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