Quiet Poetry Lounge : The game is over...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Jul 30, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Games over...

    Look at me mister, take a real good look :look: ...at what you had and lost,
    I'm getting rid of your @ss, today, right now...no matter what the cost.

    My hips are moving, and my "sway" ...still got some play,
    get to stepping, trott on...cause I have no more :nono: to say.

    My mouth done got dry, and my body's dripping with sweat,
    and just watch me and my actions...cause, no more will you get.

    The road you choose to take...I do not intend to go,
    and sooner or later, I know ...you're gonna 'reap what you sow.

    There's really only one part...that makes this story sad...
    you wanted so much to be good...yet, you wasn't really bad.

    Just confused about life's values, ...and what it had in store,
    and instead of taking life chances, you blindly chose the door.

    And the writing :deal: on the wall, and all the thoughts in my head
    it keeps vividly telling me that...you're gonna end up dead :crying:

    We had our fun, in the sun...and thank you for loving me madly,
    but I''ll be okay, yes I'll make it just fine ...and I'm holding my head up gladly.​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes to save yourself, you have to hit the road....smh. I like the direct style of this flow. Keep hitting us with more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sometime the game can cost by reasons tyte drop
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support watz, it was something different.
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, I totally agree, thanks for the luv
     
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    QueenTswana this was so very tight. Sometimes we must do to save ourselves. I really felt this scribe. And Understand where you coming from
    Keep your head up! Everything gone be just fine.
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks angel, for we never know what's in store for us. thanks for knowing how I feel.
     
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