Black Poetry : The Game (for grown folks)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jazz4u, Jan 15, 2004.

  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lips caressing syllables
    softly croon
    r i g h tthere
    spilling out rhythmic
    instructions
    among exhales
    and
    inhales
    and
    arched backs
    I w a n tyou
    echoes from bare skin
    to
    the palms of your hands
    as I follow the tug
    and pull of your
    di-(E)rections
    fingernails run firmly
    across backs as if
    moans could never be enough
    to dictate what
    sign language can
    and as trembles
    exceed verbal commands
    I am left asking
    is it my turn to
    l i c k
    s u c k
    whateva I demand​
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The inner voice of choice, right here! Very nice.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..yeah
    this is for grown folks
    nice one sis
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most def for the grown folkz
    dis was awesome scribing
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA...

    Loving the "Verbal Play"....

    This was...

    ...............shall I say... :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:


    Feelin it...fa sho!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a grown folks game...liked the way you played it.
     
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