Black Poetry : The Gallop, Part 2

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You galloped
    right through me
    Found my
    secret entry
    and apparently
    locked yourself in

    What I've found is
    My heart isn't my own any more
    It's beat, it's rhythm
    is different then before
    There are times when my pulse is
    snapped out of it's sedentary, mellow pace
    My breath quickens, my blood thumps
    as it pumps, my heart begins to race

    Your footprints leave deep impressions
    darting and dashing across my mind
    The gallop procedes, ground shaking
    thoughts, of a quaking kind
    Is this thunderous progression planned, or
    unsure of which way to go?
    Perhaps it's a bit of both, in this tremor
    that entwines us together so

    It happened so suddenly
    That moment when fate
    held the key
    and you galloped
    right through me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa!this was even deeper then pt.1 as my mind runs
    awesome scribe from within watz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even deeper? Well thank you Rich, appreciated.
     
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    watz:
    I can so relate to "The Gallop".
    Another piece of reality from
    your pen. Very nicely posed.

    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for saying that you can relate, appreciated 4Everluv.
     
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