Black Haiku : The Fury

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    An enraged ghost with
    a torrid indignant wind
    whenever you curse




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    I really feel the insight on this haiku. Can you imagine the torrent wind that little children feel from their parents when they say demonic things such as shut the f... up. Whenever, I see this happening, it hurts me to my heart. Then the children grow up often using the same horrendous language.

    Enjoyed the read on this haiku Ms. N
     
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    Joyce ~

    Yes, I can imagine how children must feel
    whenever their parents are cursing out loud
    or even directly at them.... must seem like
    a howling evil wind that brushes up against
    a child's face and turns them red, they stand
    still not knowing how to feel -- and scared!!

    Such a sad thought.... :(
     
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