Black Poetry : The Fruit of My Fancy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 21, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I kissed her deeply trying to consume her from within
    Breathing in her every breath like there's no tomorrow
    For I did not want to spill a drop of her ecstasy
    Feasting on her spirit like it was my last meal

    Exhaling gently, she slowly crept into my mind's mind
    Playing a tune in my ear that made me feel joyously safe
    Her beautiful presence permeated the room; overtaking my virtue
    This lovely female warrants many a pleasurable response from me

    Uncontrollable anxiety beckons out at such a prize to be won
    Love, or dare I say, unconditional bliss, that forms this union
    Speaking softly with thunderous conviction - I tell the world
    She is my own; she is my heart; she is my mind; let it be known

    The whispered anecdotal expression of a love uninterrupted
    Did she feel me first? Or was it merely a perpetual pathos in kind?
    We love as if we loved before; only this time with a certain voracity
    That which negates my hunger, quenches my thirst, and soothes my soul

    This is the black goddess whom once I knew; if only in my dreams
    Surrendering to the fantasy of giving all my love to her
    Avoiding all pompous thoughts of delusions of delight in her regard
    This black princess is real - though a figment of my perceived craving

    She asks of me now as she's asked of me a million times before this day
    Speaking to me in a vernacular that shines a light on my darkest dark
    "Are you the black man who hungers for me so? - Come closer and taste me
    Taste of this nectar that has long enchanted your heart and your mind

    And then, as I slowly inched forward to taste of her sweet; I awakened…
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reminds me of "Yes, Please"...

    gq...

    as usual you have taken my
    very breath away... this is
    YOU at your best!!
    i'm lovin' it to death!

    Peace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. Destee

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    i'm feel'n you now
    and please don't wake me up

    :wink:

    very nice GQ!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    awesome and well felt bruh !
     
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    Agreeing with Destee....Just let me sleep, cause that was beautiful.

    Would love to read more like this.
     
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    :spinstar: :spinstar: :drink: :spinstar: :spinstar: nooooo! :sleep: LETTME SLEEP.. O WELL I GUES I GOTTA START OVA..HMMM :?: .. O YEA NOW I MEMBA... :drink: :drink:,
    GREAT DROP
     
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    Eloquent and sensual, this flowed like a dream, soft and easy.
     
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