Khasm13 : the folly of the melancholy lolli pop

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    they call me the essence of all lollipops that's been dropped
    like gum on the street
    ready to get mushed and mashed underneath
    any arbitrary feet
    pushed beneath all the cracks and crevices
    with a bus on top like 10 jerome bettis's...

    but it was not always like that...

    i had mad flavor
    so much flavor that it could make darth vader crack a chip tooth smile
    watery watermelons, gratifying grapes
    wickedly wild strawberries, causing an earthquake
    of saliva slurpping, taste-buds chirping
    sheer delicious extacy
    you had to get next to me
    cause the explosion of sensations
    that you
    would experience
    once you
    had your
    lips wrapped around me
    could only compel you to
    keep sucking and sucking and sucking
    until there was nothing
    left but a strawberry stained stick
    secured solidly in the side of your mouth
    like a toothpick
    sugar-heads always had to get thier fix
    once at six then again at nine
    it was easy to get caught up on mine
    when i had a cherry and swirled it with a lime
    with a hint of lemon
    women wanted me the most
    cause i got their mouth moist
    in anticipation of tasting
    my lavishly laced lickable lining
    that made you forget about dining
    alway reminiscently reminding you
    of the time
    you
    spent with
    me...

    then one day...

    cannibalistic cavity creeps came crashing
    into the city
    crunching lollies without a pity
    these brutish beast cared the least
    about tantalizing tastes that tempt the tounge
    cracking candy coated covers
    is what they would tell the others then
    hmmmmmmmmm
    after their carnivorous feast was complete
    a chewed up skinny stick at one end
    were the remnants left, discarded on a whim
    my skeletal remnants rimmed garbage cans
    and trash bags
    a rag-tag ponderable plight is now my only sight
    if i could just go back in time and fight
    to leave my wonderous wrapper on
    but my raw and juicy flavor aided me on
    no longer dawn the dust falls
    with the shocking effect of an easy-e song...

    "easily i approach
    the microphone cause i aint no joke
    tell you moms to get off of my tip
    cause i have no time to give her my
    lolli"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!!

    welcome to destee's playground of flowz
    well felt poetic show u pose
    welcome to da house of many
    upon family & friend u be kin
    welcome as i bless u from above
    where i roam welcome...............!:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. StarGoddess

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    ok..............

    i feel ya.....
    i like the style of this prose....

    sheer genius if you ask me....
    the alliteration is off the hook....

    go on wit yo bad self!!

    **licking my lolli**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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    khasm!


    whateva they feedin' you in chitown...
    Please send some down here to jawja!! :lol:

    this was some of that off dha chain...
    ...makes me wanna holla at my mama
    cause it's so **** tyght type flow!! :D

    i simply loved it! thank you for sharing
    & welcome to Destee!!

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    WHOA!!! Mad talent heah brutha. Enjoyed the read.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greetings my fellow Chi-town brotha...This was tight as tight can get...Welcome to the fam....
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanx for the luv...

    i've just begun
    cause
    my lyrical uzi
    weighs a ton...
     
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    ALL DAY SUCKERS

    You got it that way- when you're special "K"

    1poetsought ~
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, tyght it is. i'm lovin' this piece fa real. keep on scribin' it out.


    ~~~jusletitflo~~~
     
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    I must have slipped past this one....yeah it was tight...almost made me think I shouldn't be readin' this!!!!
     
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