Black Poetry : the Flyer..

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Let me be a flyer...
    and pull me down when
    its enough...
    Trow me up much higher..
    but hold me tight
    or i will
    crush...

    Hey i see you know how to move me..
    its not funny cause you made me..

    yes i,m chasing the wind..
    stalking the leaves...
    blocking the sun..
    falling when i,m
    done..

    Hey i see you know how to drive me..
    its not funny cause made me.

    yes i,m chasing the wind..
    stalking the leaves..
    duck in the sand..
    and than you pick me up
    with youre powerfull
    hands..

    Hey i see you know how to guide me..
    its not funny cause you made me.

    yes im chasing the wind..
    stalking the leaves..
    return to tha land..
    and than you lift me up..

    and let me fly ..

    again..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow
    feeling the depth of dis
     
  3. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, that's nice. I hear music behind that!
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats a good idea..


    If its finished i wil let you hear it ok
     
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    This poem is nice. It has a freedom. It takes the reader into several directions and thoughts. Powerful.
     
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    hey sistah

    you presented the world another piece of art again
    i sure enjoyed it.....

    ok i'll guess i'll see around
    :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you..Hodee and beautifull sista Moham...


    Love L...
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful, deep and melodic
    thanks for sharing with us
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was
    beautiful as well as deep
     
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