Black Poetry : ...The Flow...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Sep 6, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the flow of love is so sensual, didn't you know?

    that the lips and the touch is intellectual, doesn't it show?

    that my body is sending the signals, to welcome your flow

    with my body so readily kindled, with your strokes

    as my rivers seem to open, and welcome your show

    and the plunge of you unbroken, in this flow

    and the flow of love is perfected, through a kiss

    and for years we'll come to, sit and reminisce

    for tonight could be our last time, in this flow

    cuz tommorrow i could be in heaven, didn't you know?

    and i'm scared the hell out my mind, does it show?

    but for now i'll just moan your name, in our flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hearing u loud and clear
    say it !
    in sweet whispers
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww thanks rich:D
     
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    it's nice to feel yo vibe and see u in scribe .....
    how are u !
     
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    this is so tyte!!!!!!:D sensual too..gots a hint of realtity in it...im definitley feelin this
     
  6. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Im feeling ya vibe with this, keep bringing them!!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot rich....its good to be able to write again every now and then...

    awwww thanks swtt:D u got me cheesin', lol...

    thanks so much suddenpassion...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] BACK ATCHA, THIS IS TYTE AS HELL... i DONT KNOW IF HE KNOWS, BUT I THINK I KNOW! LOL
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks girl:)
     
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    WOW..........................

    this is def' put down "as passionately" as only
    LovelyGoldenOne could!

    WOW.........................I loved it!
     
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