Black Poetry : ...THE FLAMES...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    orange and red flames
    consume my precious mane
    it continues to control life
    bring me more bitter strife
    spinnin me out of control
    puttin me in midst of turmoil
    fire engulfs me with its heat
    makin my life play offbeat
    stressin and testin my moves
    hopin to swallow my mood
    red brimming fire hugs me
    promisin not to set me free
    i can't move, i can't be me
    i can't act as i want to be
    yellow flames conquer me
    hurting me so abundantly
    when will the water come?
    quenching thirst as fire comes?
    drowning with the aqua blue
    reviving me to remain true
    black flames will charr my soul
    leaving me with no control
    everythings spiraling and gone
    just wish my life could be calm...
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so tight, sistah! Lovin it.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gempis...:)
     
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    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scintillating Searing Spiritual Trying Turmoil…
    It is said that what doesn't kill us makes us stronger....
    So what'z yo name "Her'aculez" lol .....
    U describe your journey so vividly
    it drips agony with twisted ecstasy…
    I Pray U endure to tha End-- your reward will be profound…

    1 Luv My LovelyGoldenOne
     
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    i like this piece very much
    i so hope you find peace
    and comfort ..
     
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    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like everyone else hope u find peace 2
    tyte scribe...j
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes...I feel tha same way.........I like this.......I liked tha way you expressed yo' self.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so warm and sweetly done
    i felt da pain in all
    prayers and peace be upon u sistah
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody....ya'll really don't know how much u have helped me...
     
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