Black Poetry : the fist

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The fist

    Power of da pantha
    Still in me
    One’s envy led
    To unknown blood
    Scraped by a killer’s art
    Now the party departed
    Unjustly
    Made it hard for me to trust me
    Not me, but the mirror of you
    My black people
    Together how we unite the steeple
    The oppression they showed Geronimo
    Gives me flow
    After they released the beast of knowledge and information
    They released the boy
    In truth and spirit
    Hoover killed innocent man, cuz he feared it
    What?

    The rise of intelligent elegant, aggression
    Those who clapped first, no questions
    No mask
    Showing the face of the discrimator in the temple pools
    Of the devil
    **** right we rebels
    To society
    But my brothas I wonder is it just me
    Or does Shakur still gotta be in exile
    When she closer to America than you
    And u touch the soil everyday
    To get up, and get down but still be on the up
    With the weary fist
    Raised to the sky
    Believing in reason, power, and takeover of communities we lost
    The pope can’t get hope
    Give me no ovation
    For we still slim Jims in this black crow nation


    I’m done
    Holla at the boy


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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well pose'd brutha indeed
    every word felt and hit home
    deeply as people of the people
    we have to unite in unity as one
    tyte drop
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah !
    your flow is deep
    young poet placing it down moving
    wisdom facing about the storm
    you making it known that
    we got to got to
    take car eof our own
    flow on
    feeling ya strong
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If we don't help each other then who will? Keep your flows coming, I'll keep reading.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey this was deep
    likes this read
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thought provoking...
    with an underlying cry of revolution...

    Powerful scribe!


    OOOOOOO
     
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