Quiet Poetry Lounge : the first time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 25, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet, dripping
    adolescence,
    glowing in
    post-pubescence
    firm,
    ripe &
    nubile breasted

    upon their softness
    his wooley head
    rested...


    oh no
    but that was
    long ago
    and I've since
    learned
    what I now
    know

    it wasn't when
    I was just 16
    that my womanhood
    was crowned "pure Queen"

    it wasn't when
    I stood in white;
    nor even on
    my wedding night...

    I don't expect
    to be understood
    but what I speak
    is true,
    and good...

    and truth has
    served to make me free
    to always be
    completely 'me'

    He smiled one day
    and blessed
    my rhyme...

    and real love
    touched me
    the first time

    Alyce, 1999
     
  2. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    things are revealed to us in very different and unexpected ways.

    I feel this sis!

    thanks

    B
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***wanting the touch of real love***
    ***needing the touch of real love***
    nice Al
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome wanting the touch of loveeeeeeeee
    so beautiful
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The touch of love, feeling like it was the first time. Such warmness in this.