Black Poetry : The First Time

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  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Precious moans and salty tears that burn my eyes
    Legs spread wide open as he kisses my neck
    Morals loudly repeated in my head but
    the moistness between my thighs silence them
    pants unzipped, shirt removed
    my bdy revealed.....my innocence hidden
    im only 15 but my body disagrees
    this is my first time...
    I keep telling myself that he doesnt love me
    and his black penis only wants to fill my tight hole
    but my fantasies of an orgasm blocks my thoughts
    panties removed, bra unstrapped....naked
    he takes hold of my womanly hips, cups my ample a**
    and pulls my secret garden to his face...he gives me head
    this is my first time...
    I wonder what hes thinking...
    cuz im scared as hell...but hes only gotta hold me...
    Ive been so lonely...
    I can feel his penis growing by my thighs
    he looks into my eyes...and begins his wonderful surprise
    He pushes inside me...
    I gasp as tears run down my cheek
    sex isnt exactly what i expected...the pain is unbearable
    i quietly ask him to "STOP"
    he doesn't listen...just says..."its almost there"
    a quick visit to hell for me...
    and he cums in a condom...
    this is my first time
    i feel so violated as i lay there...alone
    alone...alone...
    he left me, as they said he would...alone
    i wish i had waited for that special one
    but instead, for my first time,
    i lay in sin filled, tear and semen stained sheets...
    alone...
     
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    Man babygirl, this was a great flow...and unfortualty, he took your treasure.. :( But hey, each day is a new one to overcome your past mistakes. If you ever need to talk, I'm a private message away:)

    WELCOME TO DESTEES!!!!!!!!!!!

    :heart: :heart:
     
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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com & family
    welcome from above as i send u love
    welcome to the family of love & peace w/respect

    now he so forth strips one's of great treasures
    I say unto u
    virginity.......
    the touch
    the kiss
    in acts
    the moans
    the feelin
    the tears
    of sexuality
    the pain
    the sorrow
    the sin
    of sex
    who has da rites to an virgin
    may the comfort of forgiveness be ....
    welcome to destee:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Hi Princessflowz,

    This is a masterfully written poem. I feel your every emotion. Fear, excitement, anger, uncertainty, tears, shame and deep inner pain.

    My heart goes out to you. I hope my words embrace your sweet soul. You will one day overcome this horrible violation of your beautiful being.

    You are just a baby girl of 15. I wiped tears as I read of your terrifying plight. But I assure you you will overcome this and the beauty of who you are will grace the soul of you.

    Please know, it was him who sinned, not you. No means no!!

    In time, you will find someone who really cares about you and who loves you. When this time comes, you'll experience the glory of love. Slow down, you're only 15. Take time to find who you are. You can't find love this way. It will come to you be patient.

    Keep writing. It will help ease the hurt and pain and help you discover your precious soul.

    This is a wonderful place to be embraced.

    You are not alone. All you have to do is drop me or anyone a note and we'll be there. I promise I will be there to listen.

    All my best to you.

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    You have captured the first time for many! may this awesome scribe be of help for many more young flowers! Thankyou for sharing your gift. we are family here and if you need to talk there are many who will lend you their ear. Tyte piece!
     
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    WOW.....this was incredible and gave such a vivid picture....i'm sorry that you lost something so precious...but i'm sure you have learned to save yourself for that special one...believe me its beautiful when you do...i wish you all that best and expect more poetry...you are very talented...
     
  7. PrincessFlowz

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    Thank you all for welcoming me into your family. Right now, I'm crying because I finally feel wanted and I feel that I belong. I've always wanted to share my works. Again, I just want to say thank you and this won't be the last time you hear from me!!! :)
     
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    Awww... you are so very welcome. We are all here if you need to talk to us :grouphug:
     
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    This piece was raw and vivid...a truth for many women...your work was felt. Keep it flowing.