Black Poetry : The first instruction

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He say go n I dare not follow.
    So I stood like a stubborn mule.
    And a heart that was hollow.
    A clear fool.

    Then he closed all my doors.
    Had me sleeping on hardwood floors.
    Forcing me to go back the way I came.
    To relive my shame.

    Of a abuse n misuse of the blessings given.
    He wanted to remind me for whom I was living.
    Head down... shoulders slump.
    My journey just has begun.
     
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    acknowledgement of Him is the beginning of wisdom.

    *humbleness*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    forth seen upon him there you be ...in da wisdom of a journey abound .....step forward
    awesome scribe .....
     
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