Black Poetry : The First Day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blacklove, Jan 2, 2003.

  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    I wish i could remeber the first day
    First hour, first moment of you meeting me
    If bright or dim the season it might be
    Summer or winter for i cant say

    So unrecorded did it slip away
    So blind was i to see and forsee,
    So dull to mark the budding of my tree
    That would not blossom yet for me

    I have loved you; even now i may confess
    But do not let it cause you more distress
    Some embers of my love their fire retain
    I do not want to sadden you again

    Hopeless and toungtide, yet i loved you dearly
    So tenderly i love you-so sincerely
    With the pain and jealous and the timid know
    I pray to God to let my feelings flow.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You pouring out the heart scribe!

    Beautiful yet bittersweet, but like the butterfly they said that eludes you if you sit and quietly wait it will come and rest on your shouolder! Just wait on it and it will come...or come again!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya love is wide open
    one's ear hear ya clearly
    speak on wit ya lovin vibe