Black Poetry : The fire within me....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The fire within me baby never dies
    especially when your around to quiet my cries

    Now your gone to make your wrong right
    for me to hold it down for these lonely nights

    without the one thing i hold so dear
    the scent of you upon my pillow i hold so near

    to my heart and every being
    hope your love to stay neva fleeing

    from the one girl who put it to you
    these spoken words i write now are true

    i became sad that you had to go out on the road
    to make the money for us so we can live life bold

    wanna give me all my heart desire
    just want to let you know i'll keep the fire

    going will promise to let it never die
    my devotion to ya baby i'll try

    to ward off all the other brotha
    who wants to discover

    what it is about me that has my man working hard for me
    wanna know how i gets down must have heard how i set you free

    baby dont worry at all what yours will be lock down
    waiting patiently for you to arrive as i will listen to the sounds

    when the big truck will pull up
    and how i prayed for luck

    that my baby make it home in one piece
    so that he can recieve

    the fire that burns within me..........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely his arrival will be soon
    he knows yo love sweet burning tune

    the gentle smile and tender care
    this his heart truely now bare

    every moment time tic
    but soon y'all bodies will click

    this so sweet and divine
    see he knows u his sunshine

    God bless the love ...............
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich i appreciate the love you showed since i first join. the site should be grateful for you because you show love to everybody. and not for your favorites.:hearts2:
     
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    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting representation of your fire Nevar. I enjoyed reading your poem.
     
  5. Tantrum

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    Nice appretiation for your man-I spelled that wrong but anyway-lol
    Nice flow poet-I loved it
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the input lovnthysoul and tantrum. i sure do appreciate the love.
     
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    Keeping that home fire burning for the one you love....I enjoyed this piece nevar.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving the fire that burns.
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou watzinaname and sweetbaby face for the kind words.
     
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    Hi nevar
    When you feel the love
    it can be like a fire
    a internal light
    that glows with so much joy
    This is a lovely poem
    I just enjoy the whole tone
    of this wonderful piece

    Peace
     
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