Black Poetry : The fire in me...........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My first nasty
    I've been classy
    But now your back around
    Back to tell me I need this fix of you
    You want to show me the true art of making love
    This phone conversation turn into phone sex
    It's complex how my body wants to say yes, but my mind is saying no
    I'm no hoe
    But I need to feel this deep connection I'm dry
    I want to be wet
    Wet with you, I love to discover the countless way's
    You can make my body go into a state of shock
    Hard rock is what I'm getting
    Make me have back to back orgasm
    Make me
    Make
    Make me
    I need this trip, I need this hit
    I want to feel on top of the world
    I am on top of your world and your hands so delicately
    Touching me like I never been touch
    Ahhhhhhh it's sucks
    It sucks because I can't be with you
    I just want to feel
    The fire in me.............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talking bout what you long for, but can't have at the moment, yes we've all been there, and you brought the reader back to that place when they longed as well. Always great to read you poetess.
     
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    ain't mad at you playa

    let it out!


    :couple:
     
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    Oh, yes, that flesh is such a cruel betrayer when the mind says "no" and the body says "yes!"

    I feel you, sistah!

    But I have to remind myself that a "sexual healing" is not enough if one must settle for just the physical when it doesn't "cum" with the mental, emotional and spiritual covenant as well.

    Great piece! So many can relate! I know I can!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lookout now !
    beware i can renew da flames
    make u wet and ovaflow to a drain
    bring a convo wit sensual steam
    so u can feel da fire in you !

    This was a blazzin come get me piece
     
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    thanks for the love shown to me!
     
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    the torture of the heated core...

    FIRE indeed.

    i heard.
     
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    Sister nevar you get much props for the unabashed honesty of this piece
    My sister knows when she comes over my house and Ive spent the whole night cleaning and baking she just looks at me and says 'urge'? I say 'urge' we nod and she takes home desserts for her family and office lol

    props poetess :read: :)
     
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