Black Poetry : The finger is connected to the mindbone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jun 11, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see
    we
    be
    seeking
    heat
    creeping
    under sheets
    playing hide and seek
    among the thoughts of
    watering mouths and
    hard nipples

    fingers navigating
    to pulsating points
    of never ending joy
    nerve endings and I feel
    your stuttering breath
    drain down my monochromatic existence
    coloring my visions of me being birthed by you

    that's how deep I want to be...

    see
    my finger lingers because my mind can't
    exist without this direct corellation
    to my erection
    and my ache to have you become erect
    upon
    my thirsty body...

    ...please lay across my palette

    and quench me.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man you betta work it!!!!!
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    whoa

    "work it" is not the word :lol:

    excellent flow blak

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    peek-a-boo ! man bustin out ! tyght scribe to da maxxxxx!!

    (((((RED ALERT)))))
     
  5. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb...

    I'm on my way to get a cold shower!
     
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    Whateva you desire...
    Nice poetry
    Lovely
    Desert Storm
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam for the replies. Ya'll knows its appreciated.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my royal BLak-NeSs.


    mmmhmmm.... ni! ...this heah is what i be
    talkin' 'bout!! :lol: all this talk about
    pulsating points & thirsty bodies has got
    me ova here fannin'!! (LOL) but! i have
    to give this one a "10"!! mmm mmm mmm

    itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
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