Black Poetry : The Final Good-bye(unsure..not really a poem, please respond)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (imagine its pourin rain, a conversation b/t me n a friend)

    "so tell me how u feel." he's just lookin at me like he dont know what 2 say. then i start 2 get upset n really mad, n curse him out "u know every **** feelin i have 4 u, but u cant tell me ****. why is it so f^%&in hard 4 u 2 tell me how u feel?"

    "Come on, tell me everythin about how u felt from the 1st day u met me!!!!!"
    he still hasnt said nothin and i start 2 lose control.....
    i say while im cryin/yellin at the top of my lungs "this is it, this is my final good bye.......speak now or foreva hold ur sorrow!!" and im lookin at him, tears rollin down my face.....

    he's givin me this look like one of Brandy's songs " I dont know what 2 say and i dont where 2 start". i walk away highly upset, i slowly begin to lose it. i feel him starin at me while i walk away cryin.

    somehow i tap into his thoughts........
    he's thinkin "****, how could i do that 2 her, i know she really loves me, but i cant bring myself 2 say it........that i wanted to get w/her since day 1, and i wished she never messed w/ all them other guys... i was supposed 2 b the 1 lovin her n givin her pleasure at night."

    i blew him a kiss and walked away.....
     
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    Men are from Mars-

    i blew him a kiss and walked away.....
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol 1poetsought........hope u enjoyed......much love :)
     
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    now this one had me going i liked it
    nice scribe
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx $$Rich$$.......i try to flow, but only of what i know.lol much love.............. :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was good gurl, poem or note i felt what you were feeling, :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    thanx serenti........much love, cant wait for one of ur new ones.......... :)
     
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