Black Poetry : The Feeling You Feel is the Spirit of Me Caressing

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes, my dear,
    in life there appears
    a blessing
    for the feeling you feel
    is the spirit of me
    caressing...
    feathery touches,
    floating
    downward
    timidly
    guessing
    where the next stroke
    will linger
    playing my lullaby,
    pressing
    every key,
    hitting every note
    exactly
    your aura
    confessing
    all... as your soul's
    secret love storm
    rains down upon me
    professing
    itself in it's truest form
    for the feeling you feel
    is the spirit of me
    caressing....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this cascade deep of caressing da feelings of inner touchies
    wow ! i'm diggin dis piece flow head sista
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inner feelings do have a way of cascading deeply brotha. Glad you're digging this piece, thank you poet.
     
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    Simple, sweet and beatiful, my sister. :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sis, your support is so appreciated gempis, really.
     
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    this was so soft...
    the scribe read like a caress sista :) that it did :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Triniti, it's great to know how my words are felt. And btw, when will we read something new from you poet?
     
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