Black Poetry : THE FANTASY....(I'm Addicted to You:Finale)

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tonight...we get as close as we can
    tonight...we release all the love we've been holdin' in
    tonight...you take me to levels past ecstasy
    tonight...i'm so blind from this love makin'
    that i'm inevitably
    flyin' higher
    accelerated
    intimidated
    i'm fascinated

    tonight...in your embrace i'm cryin' desperately
    i don't want to experience the moments end of ecstasy
    oh sweet...
    sweet baby...
    show me how much you love me
    as our intwined bodies flow so lovely
    making a song that only we can hear
    strumming a passion that's so surreal

    well...
    tonight we got as close as we could
    so we just lie entangled and so deeply contoured
    i wouldn't change this moment even if i could
    the escalation of our love is
    unforgettable
    transforming
    and most of all pleasurable
    tonight...is such a special night
    full of sexual highs
    passion
    and delight

    baby please know that...
    no matter how much we fight
    it doesn't change my loves might
    i'm still addicted to your love
    the way you breath
    and you strong, sensuous hugs
    nobody in this world could please me the way you do
    there's no cure for this addiction that i'm goin' through.......
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You fantasize real pretty!

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwww thanks 1poet... :)
     
  4. cypher

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    to lose yourself in the passion of love is a heaven send....beautiful script
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot cypher...and that is a very very true statement! :)
     
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    nicely written......tyte poem
    there's no cure for this addiction that i'm goin' through.......(truly feelin this right here)..........much love....... :)
     
  7. PurpleMoons

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    Nice vibe! you musta took your time with this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love it when ya being loved da right way
    dis was a beautiful scribe of pure heart
    and the upmost love
    thanks for sharing ya mental rapture
    ummmmmmmm!!! I like dat
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sarcasm :)

    yeah i took a lil more time than usual with this one purple thanks :)

    awwwwwww thanks so much rich :)
     
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    wonderful...
     
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