Black Poetry : The FACTS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 13, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Let me see
    if I learned you right

    ...you spoke of many
    things with me late
    last night...

    Talking about Christianity,
    Bible Study, and your
    own valued philosophy

    Speaking about where
    you see yourself in
    proximity to me ~

    What your thoughts
    of 'WE' are;
    even without
    undressing me with
    those hazel-nut tinted
    bedroom eyez --
    ...'to die for'...

    Speaking about where
    you come from
    how you got here, and
    the road you are
    travelling on ~ N2

    I'm sure I heard you
    right -- in saying
    enough to conclude that
    there is enough
    room...

    You said you're "OPEN"
    to connect the dots
    with me
    mingling conversations
    that outlined
    histories of
    community
    ... and your involvement...

    ....Remembering your
    28th Birthday....walking
    on the wyld side
    presenting pleasures
    as great 'opportunities'
    for others...to seek

    ...In-common; we dialogued
    about your son,
    ...I, about my daughter...
    Us
    ...a love of riding
    with speed demonz
    who've got your back
    every mile that
    is paved to hell's
    heaven-on-earth

    Networking with the
    well-wishers' ~
    Evenings
    filled with memorable
    discussions about
    many
    many
    many things...
    and those that have yet to cum~

    I am smitten...
    Beguiled by your
    YOU-ness
    raw rare and ready
    to be introduced
    to love...
    Greetings and
    salutations in
    third - person
    giving me the
    3rd degree of
    your evolution

    ...I've witnessed
    the bare nakedness
    of your own humanity...
    and I'm quite pleased
    that the spirit
    of Him walks
    with you daily

    I'm feeling the
    order-ly fashion of the
    life you live by

    Master plans
    with-- B.L. "U" prints
    that suggest which
    paths you should
    follow...and those
    same plans
    led you -- somehow to me...

    In my voice
    while we talked
    could you hear
    the faint sighs of my
    own relief?!?

    Mental noting your
    thoughts before you
    could speak...ex-changing
    capacity for possibility

    I took
    the atmosphere of
    you in with
    every breath
    that I could breathe...
    more ground for probability
    and you held me
    as the clock struck
    12 --

    I dashed away
    before the spell
    of midnight's lust
    could unravel
    my dream

    ...but twas not a
    dream when you
    called to check
    on my safe arrival
    home
    at 1 in the
    morn' ~

    and I remember
    quite well
    the facts
    as they were
    laid~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    1,264
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    artist
    Location:
    where the sugar is in the land
    Ratings:
    +9
    now, that is too tyght! i am really lovin' this piece and the flo of it, gurl.

    ~~inkdripdrops~~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    List~

    Thank you Thank you Thank you...
    I'm glad you liked the flow of it all!

    The more I read this one it talks
    to me.....says so many things....makes
    me remember even more about my
    great encounter with someone that
    moves me to peace.....and I see him
    CLEAR-ly....each time I read
    this piece -- it is so real and unexplainable
    overwhelmingly tangible
    this person captured an essence
    of me through him like
    a pitcher catches a ball ~
    and I am loving this feeling
    loving the state it's put me in...
    not as in "spell", but state of mind...
    It's so refreshing!!


    Thank you for yet again, reading ME
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4
    N2....

    (sighing... ahhhh)

    sounds like the perfect e-ven-ing!! :)
    with the perfect gentle-Man... here's
    wishing you many more of the same!

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Sista SHYNE~

    That is soooooo sweet of you!
    I too, hope that there will be
    many more of these pleasurable
    memories made from futures
    of time spent with a
    gentle-man! I need it; and
    Lord knows there are many of
    us sista's who deserve it!!
    I look forward to tomorrows
    and all of its possibilities!

    Thank you for the warm
    wishes sista friend!

    1:heart:
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    when we have the facts

    'understanding is sooo mellow'....

    I feel you sis! I feel you. :)

    a
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Sista Alyce~

    OVERstood ya' gurlfriend!

    Thanks for showin' the love.

    1.
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    N2,

    after this I will never call you "nikki" again...no sir ree, not me...I have learned that you are on your way beyond that status...On this day May 13th, "mother's Day" will be moved to November. This day will be renamed "In To Your Soul" day...no joke...

    queen, in all seriousness the evolution of your pen, unless you were holding out on a brother, has been incredible.

    MAGNIFICENT

    one love,blak
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Blak~

    What -- he's not going to call me "Nikki" anymore....what is the world coming to?! :p

    You know I thank you for all of your wonderful well kept
    compliments on my growth & development; and I personally
    have U to thank for that!

    Just don't go extreme -- cause I'm not ready for the
    N2urSoul day thang.....no proclomations.....nothing special please....

    Instead, just promise me one thing......you'll keep reading
    and remembering the day the KING once held captive
    a soulful Cinamon Queen ~ and then he blew dust
    of gold at her and told her to 'go forth', 'proceed' -- as if
    there were not enough room to sit in a seat at the
    table of love with your honor.....because that KING
    was not ready
    to love me in between those
    sweeping second hands....... cause "right now, he only has four senses"........and I know which of those that was lost...the 'good' sense --
    Ya' know? The one that GOD gave the KING when HE presented the KING with the opportunity to know love as ME --
    ...as the Cinamon Queen loved that KING
    un-conditional - ly.....for what he is; not for who he'd hope to become... :wink:

    ~ Looking for the thematic tensions?! Well then, how'd the
    storyline read --
    .....To be continued ~or~ THE END?! You tell me....


    1 :heart:
     
Loading...