Black Short Stories : The Faceless Man

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mad Sistahly Love:heart:
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    Coco

    Paris acted like she was gonna move on homeboy but i don't know

    Malik seems interested and
    seems like a real gentleman
    so what's next?

    but it had me hooked, i was trying to see what was gonna happen

    oh well waiting for pt. 2

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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi So'ja,

    I'll post part 2 in a few days. I thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts on it.
    I gave some thoughts on a short story about a Street So'ja on the streets of NY:D I think it would make interesting reading. Hmm!

    Mad Sistahly Love:heart:
    Your, Lady St. So'ja
     
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    Very nicely written Coco.....

    And I ain't just sayin that coz you my sis......Like Soja, it kept me interested, coz.....I wanted to see what happened between them.....of course, it had two crucial elements in it thats my favorite. Romance and poetry, the poem was beautiful. I must admit, I am a sucker for romance, I look forward to Part Duex...

    4 :spinstar: rating from me......:toast:


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    Epiphany,

    I know you're not just saying it cuz you're my sister. You've never worried about hurting my feelings with the truth before and I don't think after all these years you'd start now.:) Thanks for the love.

    Madd Sistahly Love :love:
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    interesting. how much of you should i take out of this? .:)
     
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    very nice .......lovin da read more more more !!!! pt.2
    i agree wit so'ja
     
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    Baller~ :look: Huh? :D

    $Rich$~ Glad you're enjoying the story. :)

    Thank you both for showin a sistah some love.


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherykah,

    I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
    I appreciate you. It's real.
    Thank you. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Go coco girl this one here is a publisher's dream, You are very talented keep up the good work girlfriend. Now off to part II

    The deepest of them all
    Deepsistasoul
     
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