Black Poetry : The "F" Word

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  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a OLD poem I wrote, one of the very first actualy

    Could this fantasy world you whisper to me so vividly be real
    It doesn’t much matter
    You’re what I need, sometimes
    When I need it, if you’re there
    But you’re gone sometimes, when I want you
    Weeks can go by, but we pick up right where we left off
    Like no time has passed at all
    Then you’re gone again
    I don’t know where you are
    And I don’t try to find out
    Slowly the “f” word creeps into my head
    I try to push it away
    It’s not an easy task
    I try to forget, but you touch me
    You don’t really care, and I shouldn’t either
    The “f” word haunts me
    It’s dirtier than every word I want to yell at you
    But just as sweet as when your lips touch mine
    Touch me, but don’t stay
    Hold me, but not too tight
    The “f” word, like some kind of sickness…I’ve caught it
    And you’re the only remedy
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yea.. I get it. You don't have to spell it out. It sounds like it all is worth the wait..

    Very nice Renee...
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i've had this feeling too...but you make it sound so sweet...i loved this poem. much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! say no more
    tyte scribe
     
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