Black Poetry : The Eye of Her World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jul 11, 2009.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    be steadfast

    the way out will only come once




    howard :

    wait!!!!!!

    you're going to fast

    eve :

    i'm sorry Howard

    but i need this fast

    and you need to stop living in the past

    howard :

    wait!!!!!!!!

    eve :

    i'm sorry

    Eve disappears through the doorway

    and with a flash of light

    the doorway disappears

    [falls to his knees]

    but i had more to say ........

    i had more to say

    [closes the book]

    publisher :

    The Wheel of Time

    eve :

    huh?

    publisher :

    that's what this reminds me of

    The Wheel of Time

    what does Howard think?

    eve :

    he likes it so far

    publisher :

    by the way

    he told me to tell you he'd be late with the car

    eve :

    huh?

    publisher :

    the car .....

    he'll be late with the ....

    are you feeling okay?

    eve :

    yes i'm fine

    you said he'll be late with the wheels this time?

    publisher :

    uh huh

    eve :

    okay




    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Howard,
    I can only say, you got it going on brother...
    this piece was very interestingly good.
    Much thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again Howard & Eve clash for a heart stopping treat
     
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