Black Poetry : The Extent...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 7, 2007.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The extent of it
    has no words
    to aptly describe
    the graceful flight of birds

    Nor, the peaceful
    sound of a bubbling brook
    within the nature walk
    our minds took

    The extent of it
    cannot find the phrases
    to detail the journey
    through gold laced mazes

    Or give justice to
    a ruby hued sunset.
    My avatar is about
    as close as I can get

    To the extent
    that I am able to say
    It's sometimes a feat
    describing why I feel this way

    My words at times
    vanquish into my heart
    before romantic odes
    even get the chance to start

    The extent of it all is a mystery,
    and its depth, much more than a notion
    But, simply put, my love for him
    extends deeper than any ocean...
     
  2. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    landscapes

    it seems, like me, you have an affinity for landscapes. your avatar and your choice of adjectives says that clearly. may i suggest looking at some african, egiptian and alaskan landscapes? (breathtaking, aah!)

    good write
    shuga shane
     
  3. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the extent... of ur talent 4 conveying peace w ur flows is obvious. thanx 4 blessing us w this flow. :kiss:
     
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    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You flow like a gentle river... Keep flowing and growing all "the way" into the sea...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cascading and resounding maze as your avatar speaks for you ....
    awesome scribe watz wow!!!!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure that would be breathtaking indeed Sha'iyn, and yes, landscapes are beautiful. Thank you poet.
    That is quite humbling Alkebulan, I thank you for such a kind response.
    Welcome back Kevin Ervin. I'm glad that you found the flow to be gentle, thank you.
    Thank you for such a sweet response Rich, very much appreciated.
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...that was a power~filled read
    simply breathtaking...yes .like the awesome avatar, your words seem to come from a deep afar way place, in all its elegance and all its grace

    :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um sister watz as per a quote of yours

    My avatar is about
    as close as I can get


    i say you're already there

    just follow the numbers (spiritual code)

    they are right in front of you

    believe and you will be fine

    peace

    very spiritual piece
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you true2, that was quite kind. I'm trying to get more intuned with that place sis.
    Yes, So'ja I believe it is right there, waiting to be tapped. Thank you so much.
     
  10. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "My words at times
    vanquish into my heart
    before romantic odes
    even get the chance to start"
    Whew!!! you captured it no doubt!
    Clap, Clap, Clap, Clap!!!!
     
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