Black Poetry : The Experience!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Mar 17, 2002.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    face to face
    flesh to flesh
    groove to groove
    ahhh to ahhh
    ohhh to...umph!
    deep to deep
    My soul He keeps...
    While you're loving me crazy.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsJ.


    umm hmm! i know what you mean... i'm feelin'
    yo flow 'cause i know 'bout them experiences
    that have you sayin' "Lawd have mercy!" :wink:

    thank You for sharing.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister to Sister
    Scribe to Scribe
    Read to Read
    Vibe to Vibe
    This flow you've
    laid is all too
    LIVE


    Joyce ~ (well, let me say ... you's a badd sistah!)

    :)
    N2
     
  4. baller

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    oh...but for the depths of those deeps.
    when i seek fortune and fame
    and find
    nothing but game.
    and my ahhhs spill over
    into my ohhhs
    and heavens knows
    that my groove got a scratch in it
    so my face-to-face AIN'T flowing too good these days.:(

    hmmm

    maybe i'll try the flesh-to-flesh tactic
    and see how it's working

    as i look for my CRAZY

    you know.:)
     
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    tyte peace.
     
  6. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms GA: Now that you've mentioned that ("Lawd have mercy!")
    Many would be suprised to know just how much a part,
    the presence of God can actually be during love making.
    Being that this is such a holy act, (not fornication or adultery)
    couples miss out on a lot when they leave Him outside
    the bedroom door. There are no words to describe the
    intensity of this sexual union when His presence falls down.
    :lol: Another confession by a Jesus fanatic.:)

    Ms N.: I felt the excitment of your reply, reading it over
    and over again. One can only imagine what a fun loving
    person you are to be around. The poem you wrote is
    so uniquely inspirely...Loved it.
    Thanks for the read sis.

    Baller: Thanks for the read bruh. If you continue to look for love
    and develop it upon finding it in that special someone,
    I am sure that everything will gradually line up perfectly.

    J'hiah: Glad you enjoyed your sistah's poem...Thanks for the read.
     
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    Lovely scribe here!!

    u'r so right about love making in the presence of God!!
    I can dig that cause without him we're nothing!!
    Nice flava here!!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    whoa now

    feeling the poet
    whoa now

    peace and love


    dsSNy
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da Street So'ja: Thanks for feelin' da poet. :)
     
  10. mizdee2002

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    i luv this. sweet and real!

    keep doin' yo thang, Joyce

    dee
     
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