Black Poetry : ~THE EXCITEMENT OF YOU~

[4EVERLUV]

If you only knew what you do

Indescribable for the common word

makes me smile when your voice is heard

the sky seems blue-er and the grass is ever so green

the air I breathe is refreshing and clean

excitement causes me to daydream

of all kinds of intimate and sensual scenes

I’ve even noticed a sexier strut

when I wear my favorite blue jeans

kinda feeling like when I was sixteen

and the boy I had a crush on

finally noticed me standing by the soda machine

sometimes I just close my eyes and scream

as silly as that may seem

excitement got me wanting to break my routine

try some foreign and different things

like letting go of the past

because tomorrow brings glorious presents

in handsome 6 foot 2 packages

excitement got me hangn’ by a string

anticipating every wonderful thought

thinking of him brings

a feeling of multiplied euphoria

so long to yesterdays tears and fears

I’m rising each day with exhilarating cheer

excitement got me floating

in a different atmosphere

please stay here excitement

no matter what you do

because I am really luving

THE EXCITEMENT OF YOU​

 

[$$RICH$$]

You can say dat again .......whewwwwww the thoughts dat just shot through my mind
justice can't judge it as all my yesteryears gone sometime i ask why did i let it in
to break my core .......i tell you if i knew then what i know now it would have been
whewwwww....

This one got my head spinning cause the EXCITEMENT dat's in my mind got me in
chilly bumps right now thinking.....if she only knew what's in my head !

 

[Harry Hyman]

4EverLuv - You have succeeded by injecting breathlessness in the lung's ability to take air in. When that happens, any reader standing in its way will be sucked in by the ensuing gasps. And after "multiplied euphoria", oxygen may be needed. This was without a doubt sensually inspirational with a positive outlook for tomorrow, and that takes talent. I loved it. Namyh

 

[4EVERLUV]

$$RICHIE$$:
Somebody got you all open...hehehe
Head spinn'n huh...hmmm...
How cute... I am sure she knows
how you feel, your having difficulty
hiding it. lol Thank you dear for the
read and your continued luv.

Harry:
I must tell you how your words
made me smile so....I have so
much luv and respect for your
talent that reading your words
touched me. Thank you so much
for the read and your sweet words
of support. You are the best

 

[queentswana]

Your excitement, excites me to the upmost sis, and your heart speaks volumes ...great piece poet!!