Black Poetry : The Essence Of...

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  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The essence of...

    Is the yearning of desert vegetation for the soothing taste of precipitation.

    The undying attraction of protons enchanted by teasing electrons.

    The magnetism of earth, moon, and sun; locked in an undying flirtation
    The time between day and night, when the two merge to form twilight.

    The essence of...

    Is not the sex, but the feverish moments before...
    The tender minutes after...
    When we embrace and become the universe.
    And the moon is your face
    The sky, your skin
    The stars, beads of sweat, between us
    That connect us
    And the fusion of our heartbeats
    ...the Sun.

    The essence of...

    Is inspite of time and place...
    Or circumstance
    Does not depend on a certain date or chance.
    Is the space between the words...
    I LOVE YOU
    When our eyes dance
    Lost within a trance
    And time spent together feels like forever
    Trapped within a second...
    And time spent apart feels like forever lost in the dark until...
    Infinity is broken
    By our next kiss
    That whispers...
    I MISS YOU

    Legendof_1_Spirit
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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legend

    I cannot call forth the words that adequately describe the flood of emotions I am experiencing. Language fails me this morning; but your words, Poet, are taking me gently into this day!

    Outstanding!

    Thank you!

    a
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    legend, this one is truly that...lovin' this piece, dear poet. keep on scribin', i am definitely watchin'.

    ~~~mindwavesoflovepoetry~~~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legend~

    Well scribed poet!

    "10"
     
  5. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooh..... this one gives me goosebumps!!!

    ~soothing mind musiq~

    diggin this style & check'n fa mo.....

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A MASTERPIECE OF MAGICAL FLOW U R
    SAY DEM WORDS HEA!!
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FEE-NOM-MEE-NAL!! lol

    :uzi: :uzi: shot me right thru tha heart wit dat one boo!!!:kiss:
     
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