Black Poetry : The Essence of Thy Beauty

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Essence of Thy Beauty is more than skin deep
    More than
    a pretty shell that shelters thee
    More than
    a radiant smile that brightens thy day
    More than
    The way thy walks and sways
    More than

    The colorful hues brushed on thy toenails and fingertips
    More than
    The the curves and dips that trace thy breast, thighs, and hips
    More than
    The sweet and tender words that slip from thy lips
    More than
    The sizzle from the heat thy exudes from head to feet
    More than

    The embrace around thy waist
    More than

    The taste from thy tongue from a passion kiss

    More than
    The scent of thy skin that’s lingers long after thy leaves
    More than
    The feeling of serenity inside the comfort of thee
    More than
    the blood that pumps through thy viens

    The essence of thy beauty
    It covers every space every place its the neucleus
    the foundation the base
    the beginning the middle and the end
    the inner and the outer of thy soul
    no other quite like it.. they broke the mold
    can you hold thy's attention
    and capture the essence
    of thy beauty
     
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    The essence encompasses everything, this was so beautiful Sister 4Everluv.
     
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    um

    yes feeling you here

    especially because i look deeper than just the surface as well

    great write poet

    beautifully written
     
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    sweet melodies of essence leaves a tasty flava to hold on to
    this was a awesome write
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz, So'ja, & $$RICH$$:
    Thank you all so very much for your words of kindness and
    for taking the time to read me. You all are GREAT!!!!



    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise sister the greatness is what u spread and instill likewise!
     
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