Black Poetry : The Essence of Intrigue

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (from my early writing dayz)

    December 21, 1998
    9:19pm

    It is amazing for me to see
    How the simplicity of your entity
    Is so, fascinating
    Well maybe it is
    That you are so much your own identity
    That it would be unbelievably difficult
    For me not to be trapped in the center of curiosity

    Your personality’s dress
    Is in no way complex
    But yet still I stress
    To figure how it appears to possess
    Such grand magnificence

    Weary from chase
    My mind stops to rest
    With visions of your image
    My eyes are caressed
    Motivated I proceed
    Captivated I am received,
    By the essence of intrigue.

    (c)1998
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within da thoughts one's mind seek da essence of one's
    beauty yet da heart knows , forth da mind wonders still
    as the light shine from darkness u see the love of one to know.
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lifetime of love is a lifetime of solving the mystery of that inner magic and chemisty that always attracts us to the others and keeps us guessing.....well written...loving it!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your name gives way to your gift...this one i enjoyed...continue to drop seeds of wisdom into fertile soil of Destee's garden...
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank-you
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    nice work

    pd
     
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