Khasm13 : the envisage....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    singing a song of six pence
    to rinse your thoughts of pretense
    i'm not that man who put you on the other side of the fence
    hence there is no reason to be so tense
    we are the same...you and me
    we've both been in the rain...you and me
    we've both been part of the game...you and me
    both felt the poisonous dagger of pain....you and me
    but i got the antidote to cope from the loss of hope
    and basically it's all the poems i wrote
    ....and still witting while others wanna keep on fighting
    igniting the fury of the soul...not knowing hate makes u pay a heavy toll
    until u lose control and your heart beats with a hole
    the loss of compassion can easily be masked in the righteous mind
    your physical can be masked in fashion...but still a broken heart needs time
    but even time is a funny thing like a midget wearing sunny bling
    if u don't wanna heal then time has no appeal
    and thas real
    cause some hearts turn to ice from experiences that sliced
    and then mutates like spliced genes in the labs of fiends
    regardless of how tainted this world is painted...
    don't eva give up on your dreams
    because dreams are what make us gods in this whole crazy scheme
    know what i mean?
    and if you can't catch the meaning then u musta stopped dreamin....
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow

    i c u gettin ur flow on

    one love
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I think I love you! :luv:

    LOL! *just kidding, though!* However, I do love your "vision" in this!

    WHEW! You make a sistah SWOON! (lol) I swear I heard Al Green in the background singing, "Let's Stay Together...Lovin' you whether, whether, times are good or bad, happy or sad..."
     
  4. Khasm13

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    always misslady....thanks

    thanks for the props cherry...this site has a wealth of inspiration if every your pen runs dry...welcome...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    that is real

    this was hot brethren

    :terrific:

    dreamin' inside the crazy schemin'
    trying get the meanin'
    around all this spiritual treason
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we are the same...you and me
    we've both been in the rain...you and me
    we've both been part of the game...you and me
    both felt the poisonous dagger of pain....you and me
    but i got the antidote to cope from the loss of hope
    and basically it's all the poems i wrote


    This right here say it all brother

    if u don't wanna heal then time has no appeal
    and thas real
    cause some hearts turn to ice from experiences that sliced
    and then mutates like spliced genes in the labs of fiends
    regardless of how tainted this world is painted...
    don't eva give up on your dreams


    Then u took it home wit truth on da reality
    this joint was mad hot and on point i bow in da grace of ya pen bruh !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hate erodes the soul, eventually your life gets washed away. Hope that makes sense, lol, there's so much I like about this piece, it just flowed genuine truth, and posed on point. ^5!
     
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    Wise counsel my brother.

    Your perceptive powers are those of our ancestors.
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks for the love fam.....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Peace fam.

    Your honour, this was right! I like this, reciting out loud gives me power.

    One.

    - Ikoro