Black Poetry : The Enigmatic

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You who makes the mystics secrets known
    and the cover of darkness of the occult blown
    Next to you, the transcendental is brought down to earth
    that which is impenetrable is given birth
    that which is clandestine and cryptic
    is made down right explicit
    in the puzzle of life you are the key, the common thread
    you unravel the mystery and clear our head
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a transcendental climb to...heavenly places.

    interesting.
     
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    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like. this poem has something that just speaks to me.
    "Next to you, the transcendental is brought down to earth"
    i like that line in particular.
     
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    wow

    short but sweet
     
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    thankx post mean alot
     
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    nice flow
     
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